Feedback after pitch to Ken

7 12 2009

Once we’d pitched our idea of doing a documentary on Emily Brookes and presented our storyboard and treatment Ken gave his feedback:

We explained that we wanted the majority of it observational and it to keep flashing back to the interview in the studio and have voiceovers over photos of when she was younger acting.

We also explained we wanted it low lit to add to the atmosphere in the hotel and have action shots of her cleaning e.g. hoovering ,dusting.

FEEDBACK TO THIS

- keep it simple

- don’t make it profile like more observational content

- get the message across and not too much use of archive

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