Our observational footage was now done. We were extrememly happy with what we had recorded and captured.
I think the feedback form others and criticism has helped us to produce a more potent piece. We have focused and things we would usually be laid backabotu and made sure every aspect of the production (sound. visually) was as sharp as possible.
We experimented alot with shots and bounced ideas of each other on what we could produce to reflect atmosphere in Emily’s cleaning and after a few mess arounds had some really good shots.
Now all it was is showing what we had to Ken.
FEEDBACK
The feedback from our observational footage of Coombe Abbey Hotel :
- He liked our visuals, strong picture
- He liked establishing shots of outside area to break up piece of the interior hotel room
- Have a structure of visuals to give the project a strong foundation and make it visually aestethic
- More close ups of Emily so that the audience can relate and meet her properly earlier on in the documentary
- Add a visionetter to make the edges of her in the studio darker again to make it more atmospheric as he said it looked like we had tried to glam it up by brightening the whtie background of the studio.
Considering how much we’d done and thoguht Ken would give alto of major criticism to ensure our piece to be the best it could be again we were really happy with his response. It was little adjustments we could work with to improve our work but these little adjustments made a big effect on the way the documentary looked so we were grateful for the reflection.
We know have to go and edit the changes.
